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Тема в разделе "Английский язык", создана пользователем Afterglow, 4 апр 2010.

  1. Afterglow

    Afterglow New Member

    Исправьте ошибки, где они есть.The COSMETIC company "FIBS" - one of leaders in the EUROPEAN market on production of REJUVENATING COSMETICS. Unlike manyother manufacturers working in the sphere of COSMETICS, "FIBS" lets out not only finished goods, but also such important production for women, as a skin food. Last year at the enterprise the first line on production of creams was started, and now there is a preparation for start of the second line by means of which it will be possible to make cosmetics at home.Initially, as experiment, the plan of production was put the insignificant. But already today by means of this line of production it is let out more planned twice! And outputs constantly increase - in comparison with 2006 indicators grew by 20%.Nevertheless demand for production only increases. First, only natural products for own production are used. Secondly, to many girls and the women working in the sphere of cosmetics, such structure is necessary for youth preservation. "Fibs" isn't necessary a place. In search of the latest developments in the cosmetics sphere specialists of the company carried out monitoring of the market of the equipment and entered the Ukrainian market which developed absolutely new scheme of production.The low-quality fake and its sale for the original is the main differences of the Ukrainian market from European.But, the staff of the company deals with this problem and says that results already are. Therefore advise to buy "Fibs" cosmetics in the European shops or through online store.
     
  2. ciberstorm-sp

    ciberstorm-sp New Member

    похоже нужно переделывать каждое предложение.
     

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